My Pitch

My pitch was shown to the peers in my media class in order to get feedback from them as well as giving them information on my media video. This feedback would help me edit my video and know what I could add or what needs improving. Their feedback included comments such as:

• Ensure your ideas are realistic and can be carried out/filmed.
• Ensure you use various camera angles.
• Ensure you have thought out your music video ideas thoroughly before beginning to film.
• I like the idea of having a main protagonist instead of a group.
• I like the idea of referring back to your main protagonist on the bed lip singing to explore her emotion.
• I dislike the idea of having a main protagonist instead of a band.